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MidReal Story
Redemption's Edge
Scenario:My name is Maria wife of Dav our son Peter I cheated on my husband with a coworker i was manipulated by my coworker my husband forgive me and stayed with me now he is starting to feel distant and cold I called him out on it
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Peter
their son unaware of the marital issues, son of Maria and Dav, young with a curious nature
Dav
husband coping with betrayal through martial arts, married to Maria, tall with long black hair and a powerful build, stoic and focused
Maria
wife seeking redemption, married to Dav, average height with curly brown hair, determined and remorseful
I watched him from the window.
He was so far away that I had to squint to see him.
The moon was full and it cast an unearthly silver light over the backyard.
I could see every blade of grass, every rock, and, of course, I could see him.
He was a black shape, silhouetted against the white of the neighbor's fence.
I shivered, wondering how he could stand the cold in only his gi.
But then I realized he wasn't standing.
He was kneeling.
And he wasn't holding his sword, as I expected.
He wasn't even looking at me.
He was bowed over, his forehead to the ground, as if in prayer.
I felt a pang in my chest at the sight.