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Picking Up Aaloof

Scenario:*Margie a middle aged housewife,leaves her husband and embarks on a road trip from Brooklyn New York to Seattle in 1950 after her affair with a local youth comes to light.
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*Margie a middle aged housewife,leaves her husband and embarks on a road trip from Brooklyn New York to Seattle in 1950 after her affair with a local youth comes to light.

Margaret "Margie" Johnson

She is a housewife living in Brooklyn, New York. She is adventurous, introspective, and restless. Margaret embarks on a solo road trip to Seattle in 1950, leaving behind her husband after their marriage becomes strained following her affair with a younger man. The journey becomes a journey of selfdiscovery as she navigates through unfamiliar territories, encounters various characters, and reflects on her life choices. Margaret grapples with the consequences of her actions and seeks a fresh start.

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Alofson

He is a mechanic working on Margaret's car in Fairbanks, Alaska. He is friendly, knowledgeable, and observant. Alofson plays a brief but important role in Margaret's journey as she attempts to drive her car to Alaska and then on to Seattle. His assistance with the car ensures that Margaret can continue her journey safely through the rugged terrain of North America. His presence also provides Margaret with some muchneeded human interaction during her long journey.

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Sam

He is the young man Margaret had an affair with in Brooklyn. He is carefree, adventurous, and charming. Sam plays a minor but significant role in Margaret's life as the catalyst for her decision to leave New York. Although he is not directly involved in the road trip to Seattle, his actions contribute significantly to Margaret's desire for change and freedom. Sam represents the kind of life Margaret could have lived if she had chosen a different path.

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Margie
Margie was the kind of woman who would do anything to get what she wanted.
And what she wanted now was out.
Out of her marriage, away from the man who had been her husband for over twenty years.
Tom had been good to her.
He had been patient, understanding, and when she had needed it most, he had given her a beautiful daughter.
But Tom was traditional and while he might have been willing to forgive her transgressions, he could never forget them.
And so they decided on a divorce.
It wasn’t an easy decision for either of them, but it was the right one.
They both knew it was the only solution.
Margie had always been a little restless.
Even in her teens, she had felt trapped in the small world of Brooklyn, New York.
She had dreamed of far-off places and adventures.
Of being someone more than just a housewife.
But life had gotten in the way and before she knew it, she was middle-aged with no regrets but no accomplishments of her own either.
Meeting Sam had changed all of that.
He was young, free, unattached.
He was the kind of man she could have been with if she had chosen differently.
He was the kind of life she could have had if she had chosen differently.
Their affair had been passionate and all-consuming.
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I grip the steering wheel tighter as my Chevrolet rumbles down Ocean Parkway.
The morning sun catches the rearview mirror, reflecting the empty backseat where Sarah used to sit.
Past Prospect Park, where Tom and I walked every Sunday.
Past the mechanic shop where Sam first smiled at me.
Each landmark grows smaller, dimmer in my mirrors.
The car rattles over a pothole near Brighton Beach, and I notice my wedding ring still on my finger.
At the next red light, I slip it off, place it in my purse.
The traffic light turns green.
Margie: "Sam, I need to know if this is real for you, or just another adventure."
Sam: "Margie, I've never been more certain about anything; you're the reason I want to settle down."
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Margie: "Then let's make it real, because I'm ready to start over with you."
I park outside Sam’s apartment on Avenue H.
Rain taps the windshield of my packed Chevrolet.
Through his ground-floor window, I watch him pack clothes into a cardboard box.
He moves slowly, deliberately, as if he’s trying to remember everything.
After twenty minutes, he finally comes out.
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But he’s empty-handed.
He stands in the drizzle beside my car and says, "I need to settle some accounts at the garage, sell my motorcycle, talk to my mom. I’ll catch up with you in Seattle."
His voice sounds distant, rehearsed.
I grip the steering wheel tighter, nod mechanically.
I pull away from his curb, windshield wipers keeping time with my racing thoughts.
The rain blurs the Brooklyn streets I’ve known all my life.
At each stoplight, I glance in my rearview mirror, half-expecting to see his motorcycle following me.
But there’s only an endless stream of unfamiliar cars.
My hands shake slightly on the wheel as I approach the bridge’s entrance.
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The massive steel structure looms ahead, its cables disappearing into the gray sky.
I shift into a lower gear, merging with bridge traffic.
The bridge's metal grating hums beneath my tires as I merge into the center lane.
Rain drums steadily on the roof.
Trucks spray mist across my windshield, obscuring the view ahead.
I grip the wheel tighter, forcing myself to concentrate on the yellow lines and brake lights ahead instead of the rearview mirror.
My wedding ring slides around loose in my purse with every bump.
The radio crackles between stations - familiar Brooklyn frequencies fading to static.
When I reach the other side, I pull into a gas station and unfold my map on the steering wheel.
Margie: "I thought I'd feel free once I crossed the bridge, but now I'm just scared."
Sam: "Fear's part of it, Margie, but remember why you're doing this—it's for you, for us."
Margie: "I know, and that's what keeps me going, even when everything feels uncertain."
Picking Up Aaloof