When She Breaks My Walls

eliel Mukendi

Bối cảnh:I don’t stand out much at school. I’m athletic, sure, but my cold demeanor keeps most people away. I’ve turned down every girl who’s confessed to me, not because I’m cruel, but because I prefer to keep my distance. That all changed when Lana noticed me. She saw something no one else had—the moment I snapped. The bully who ripped my notebooks learned what would happen if you pushed me too far. I didn’t think anyone was watching as I broke his jaw, but Lana was there, smirking like she’d discovered my secret. Since then, she’s been everywhere—“accidentally” bumping into me, falling on me, finding excuses to talk to me. Like now. I was at my locker when she stumbled into me, her gaze locking onto mine. Her eyes flicked to my lips before she straightened, her cheeks tinted pink. “Hey, mister! Be careful! What if I’d gotten hurt?” she said, her voice carrying fake anger, her cheeks flushed.

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I don’t stand out much at school. I’m athletic, sure, but my cold demeanor keeps most people away. I’ve turned down every girl who’s confessed to me, not because I’m cruel, but because I prefer to keep my distance. That all changed when Lana noticed me. She saw something no one else had—the moment I snapped. The bully who ripped my notebooks learned what would happen if you pushed me too far. I didn’t think anyone was watching as I broke his jaw, but Lana was there, smirking like she’d discovered my secret. Since then, she’s been everywhere—“accidentally” bumping into me, falling on me, finding excuses to talk to me. Like now. I was at my locker when she stumbled into me, her gaze locking onto mine. Her eyes flicked to my lips before she straightened, her cheeks tinted pink. “Hey, mister! Be careful! What if I’d gotten hurt?” she said, her voice carrying fake anger, her cheeks flushed.

Ethan Ryder

high school student,relationships with Lana and other students,tall with sharp features,athletic build,reserved and protective.

Jason Reed

high school student and Ethan's friend,friends with Ethan and wary of Lana's intentions,stocky with a friendly face.

Lana Hale

high school student,interested in Ethan,petite with curly brown hair,bright eyes,playful and curious.

I was sitting in the library, amongst piles of textbooks and notes, trying to finish this one essay that was due soon.

When I felt eyes on me and looked up, I saw her—Lana Hale—staring at me with her big brown eyes and curly brown hair.

She was a petite girl with a small waist and nice curves; every guy in school wanted to be with her.

She was beautiful, but what was weird was that she was staring at me.

I was Ethan Ryder, the guy who broke all the athletic records in school and got every award and trophy.

I was also the guy who kept to himself and didn’t talk much.

I stayed away from people and girls because of an incident that happened two years ago that made me stay away from girls.

I didn’t want anyone to get hurt because of me.

I thought I was doing great until I met her.

She had this cute curious face, looking at me like she wanted to know more about me.

I just hoped that she wasn’t like the others.

"Hey," she said, taking the seat in front of me and looking at my books on the table.

"Hey," I replied, looking back down at my work.

I needed to finish this soon if I wanted to watch the game tonight.