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Vengeful Reckoning: A Tale of Betrayal and Redemption
Scenario:a teen boy named Zack who is bullied and abused by everyone abused by his parents at home and bullied and beaten at school except his one friend Ben who he has known since kindergarten one day he snaps and can't take it anymore and snaps and goes on a killing spree killing everyone who has bullied, abused or just been mean to him for example there's a girl named Ava that Zack has a crush on she knows it and her and a group of bullies plan to have Ava pretend to like Zack back and plan a date at a movie theater Zack is happy and shows up and waits for hours before realizing it was a prank from Ava and the bullies he breaks into her house at night and cuts her heart out of her chest and says "you broke my heart so now I'm gonna break yours" and rips her still beating heart in half, she metaphorically broke his heart in half so he actually literally broke her heart in half then there's a guy who would always make fun of him for having glasses so Zack ripped his eyes out and said "i think might need glasses now too oh wait that won't help you don't even have eye *evil laughs*" then finishes him off by slitting his throat with a knife Zack gets home and his parents are both high on meth as always and are in a bad mood as always and takes it out on Zack and they both start beating him Zack hits both of them and runs to his room scared he then gets his dad's gun out and shoots both his parents in the head his friend Ben slowly starts to figure out he is the killer and tries to snap him out of it at the end of it he tries talking to him by giving a heartfelt speech about how much he cares about him and how he has become the bully and abuser himself and tells him to turn himself in to the authorities to get help Zack tears up and says that he loves Ben and thanks for being a great friend then kills himself in front of Ben at Zack's funeral Ben makes a speech about how Zack is the victim and Ben becomes a motivational speaker who tries to spread the awareness of what bullying can turn someone into to try to prevent other bullied and abused teens to tell someone and not to turn to violence we cut to years later Ben now 30 still a motivational speaker it shows Ben at Zack's grave and puts a picture of Ben and Zach together on his grave, The End
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Zack Thompson
a bullied and abused teen who turns to violence,friends with Ben,short and wiry with glasses,deeply troubled and vengeful.
Ava Peterson
a girl Zack has a crush on who leads him into a cruel prank,acquaintance of Zack,slender with long blonde hair,manipulative and cruel.
Ben Miller
Zack's childhood friend and the only one who cares for him,friends with Zack,tall and athletic build,compassionate and tries to reason with Zack.
I was just a kid when I first met Ben.
He was the new kid in school, and I was the only one who would talk to him.
I guess you could say we were friends from the start.
We did everything together, and I mean everything.
We played cops and robbers, cowboys and Indians, and even went fishing at the pond down the street.
Ben was a great friend, and he was always there for me when I needed him.
But as we got older, things started to change.
I started getting picked on at school by this guy named Mr.Johnson, and Ben didn’t do anything about it.
He just sat back and watched as Mr.Johnson made fun of me for wearing glasses and having a big nose.
He didn’t even try to help me when he shoved me into my locker or tripped me in the hallway.
I guess you could say that’s when I realized that Ben wasn’t really my friend after all.
He was just using me so he wouldn’t get picked on himself.
The summer before high school, I remember thinking about all the things that were about to happen.
I was excited to finally be the big man on campus, but I was also scared to death.
I knew that things were going to be different, but I didn’t know how different they would actually be.
And that’s when I realized that Ben and I would probably never be friends again.
It was really hard for me to accept that, considering we had been friends for as long as I could remember.
But at the end of the day, it just wasn’t worth it to be friends with him anymore.
I was better off without him.
As we stood in front of the school, Ben and I went our separate ways.
He had made a ton of friends over the years, and they all wanted to hang out with him.
I, on the other hand, was forced to go my own way.
I was always alone.
The first day of school was tough for me, to say the least.
I had never been picked on so much in my entire life.
Mr.Johnson made a game out of it, actually.
He would come up with a new way to humiliate me every single day, and then he would tell me exactly what he thought about me.
“It’s nice to see you’re still wearing those stupid glasses,” he said to me as he walked by my locker one morning.
“What’s wrong with your eyes?
Are you too blind to see without them?”
It wasn’t just Mr.Johnson who picked on me either.
No, it seemed like everyone did.
The girls in my class would laugh at me when I walked by, and the other guys would make fun of my clothes and shoes.
Even some of the teachers had something to say about me every now and then.
It’s hard to explain how that made me feel, but it wasn’t good.
I remember the first time I saw Ben after that first day of school.
He was walking down the hallway with a group of guys, and they were laughing and having a good time.
When we locked eyes, his face turned red, and he looked away as if he didn’t even know me anymore.
That was the breaking point for me.
I couldn’t believe that he could treat me like this after everything we had been through together.
But I guess that’s what happens when you become popular in high school.
You forget about the people who were there for you when you needed them most.
I was furious that Ben treated me this way, but there was nothing I could do about it.
